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2009-04-30 21:46:34

Read the following extract from an answer to exercise 8 task 6, which was written by a student ans contains many errors.
Modern technology is transforming the way we work and it of benefit to all of society.
  The modern technology can transform all ofsociety for example when you work in your farmer by machine you ern lots of produse . but you work withot technology you'll have a little so we have know the modern technology has benefit for us,but some countries haven't modern technology then they can not grow equal with some countries that use to modern technology like 3th word's countries.
* Correct the spelling
* Check the grammar. In some cases you can simply correct the errors but you may have to rewrite some sentences entirely.
*Decide whether you need to add puncturation or appropriate link words,or to reorder sentences entirely.
*Check the style.Remember you should use foll forms(they are not they're)in this type of writing.
Time:5 mimutes
 
When you have finished,check with the answer key for one possible version.
Discussion
This exercise shows you how important it is to check your work carefully,especially to make sure that you have used correct forms. For practice you should repeat exercise 11 with all the texts you have written so far: Time yourself and see how many errors you can find and correct within five minutes.Check your work with a friend or a teacher.
 
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